hmmm well deep imaginary motion on this peice
deep emoitions on how you used the wordlay to become part of the action which is good in poetry to do
Qoute""Slowly I am loosing a grip of reality...
listening to the hypocrites voices who claim to beleive in christianity...
Blasfemy and hypocrecy is the what they represent...
knowing that none of us is truly heaven sent...
Knowing my path, of humanity's true wrath, trying to wash the hurt with just a bath...Qoute""" that was mad deep ill imaginary it gave you a picture of wat he musta felt
imaginary i give you a 8/10
wordplay and ryhimn sceme was a 7/10 i aint like the way you wrote ir in a sene but still good poem i guess poets jus have there own way of writin
overall id give you a 9/10 very good peice much respect