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Old 08-12-03, 03:45 PM   #15
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Evny Your Verse Was Aight, You Had A Few Played Punches, Like The Next In Line. Your Flow At The Start Was Pretty Messy, Picked Up Near The End Though. You Had Me Rollin' On A Few Lines. Some Aight Disses, And Personals Aswell. Shadow Had A Good Flow, Some Aight Multi's, Again... A Few Played Out Punches. The Last Few Bars Werent Hitting As Hard As Your First. I Felt You Attempted To Use More Wordplay, But All In All I Felt Envy Stayed More Consistant With His Verse.

Vote: NY ENVY

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I Cant Poll Vote As To My Post Count Isnt Where It Should Be Yet. But I Took The Time To Read, Critique And Vote As Best I Could. So, If You Wouldnt Mind Returning The Favor In My Battle With Liam It Would Be Greatly Appreciated...

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