Impact Piece..

'Looking through the iron clouds at this hypocritic world
shattered dreams are the remains of this fucked up earth
Opening my eyes to see that honesty doesn’t live here anymore
evil shown as on tv, makes me feel different than before.'

The strength in the opening really sets the show, lines up the rest of it... encaptured me - I had to read on..

'Lend out a helping hand and be eachother’s guide
and help us wipe away this agony I feel inside'

And I like how you have closed it with a hopeful message, even after reading your inner turmoil, your giving us a solution, yet still keeping it personal..

Nice Work~

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