umm good thing i cant vote on this one. id say u both loss. thomson im not sure if u had good lyrics or what not because i couldnt hear what u saying. To me u sounded like a fake loon. idunno. And MOC your quality is ummm...... for lack of a better word its "poop". Your lyrics were junkyard worthy. i dont think i heard one multi or metaphor. Anyway if i could vote id say thomson.

tips for both of you:
Double up - A good practice

Confidence - This means mic presence. rap like u got sumtin u want to say and u want all these mofo's to understand / feel it.

Meta's - User more metaphors/similes people like to think.

Overall get more personal and use more wordplay and metas and shit. keep working at it.

PS. Im only being so hard to get u better.. Dont take it personal*