If this is true then I give my condolences and can only say I'm sorry. The song is ill, I like the way it flowed great imagery and your vocab. captured the deep emotion in the piece. The topic is somewhat played but a harsh reminder of the things we go through in life. overall I would give this a 9/10. There wasn't a single thing I would change. And staying true to form I will leave my favorite line/bar from the song as a closing. 1

"FIRST goes the echo-bellow as the heat blow-
MELLOW SCENE BURN IN INFERNO-all in slow mode"-nice shit right there.