The way it flows it will probably be a good audio. I didn't understand a couple of the lines(See bottom of post) I liked the overall theme. I ain't a mufucka but son i feel ya pain. Also did you write the hook in there or was that the three verses? I felt this piece and give it a 7.5/10. Keep ya head up! 1

Like im live n life in a labyrinth how im constantly toggled-didn't get how you were "toggled in a labyrinth.

Ya river runs smoothly, while blood is flaccid in my veins-not sure if blood could be flaccid I might be wrong though.

So understand my troubles, when u see me swallowed by tears..
Been hallowed by fears, so I follow bottles of beer-been there done that.........

Please don’t tell me u feel me and understand my pain..
The difference between me and u is im still struggle n today-i feel this right here the most.