I read both your poems and this is my favorite of the two the vocab was raw and the inter rhyming made it all the more interesting. a conversation with the devil with you as the agressor is dope!!!

"Wake up motherfucker!
Cause I got some heat for yo ass at this moment!
Pay attention cause it's about to be some smoke in the city
and I don't want you to say I wasn't around when
I dropped godly verbs that showed you no pity. "-what a way to open up a poem! it caught me and i had to read the rest. I give you mad props for this. Thank you for the experience.1