here is a tip. Dont post your garbage expecting to be praised. Post it to get critisism and advice. To say im hating and listen to to much eminem and shit is one of the dumbest things you can say. and kid ive been in 69 underground FREESTYLE battles.. so dont tell me how a freestyle should sound ok? second kid where do u live huh? suberbs? Do you know where i live? south central los angeles. Have you seen training day? you know where he goes to his girl's house on the dead end street with all those bloods? i lived their for a while. right off crenshaw. I dont live to far from their now. So to say i just watch movies and dont speak from real life is ignorant. So speak on facts. no one is hating on ya shit. that track was not that good period.