This would be an excellent peice, but, the vocabulary seemed false, you really overdone it to the point where it seemed you were roaming the squalid filth in which you lived for a huge word to impress with.

That was not an insult, an example, i hardly used any big words and it sounded 'advanced' When one can sound intellectual without use of intellect, they are truly an intellectual

Simply, be more natural, the point and flow of the poem was good, though, and you reached you're anger/depression at life's mistakes proudly and well...Simply needs more emotion and less fabrication......
Good drop, in all other area's though, enjoyable and readable, and don't re-vamp, as i've said our mistakes, or other's opinions of us make us who we are...