someone said_____________ Step Your Game Up!
and you did what they said...this was well done and
a dfference in the flow was noticable. In the third verse
its there,but then it goes away...

*being consistent*..only critique...and write what you would
say if you were actually speaking to somebody forreal

if the third verse was yours its all good but you have
~youngstes thuggin~ then the verse and you touched
on the many things that people live with and eventually
grow out of to some degree..made me think back
a couple years at least....shit was crazy.....

not bad girl..wheres your siggy?