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Old 08-13-03, 08:47 PM   #3
Crysis
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Originally posted by ~Young P~
Ayo ATL...i REALLY liked da second part and i aint gonna hate on da first part...but it wuz all multi's and meta's and got boring after a while.... it lacked nice flow.... da second part wuz nice tho.... youngblood....overall i liked your verse a bit betta becuz u added a fair amount of multi's and meta's, nut u had nice flow... u flowed through lines, into da next line... great on dat... punches were pretty good but i liked atl's second part punches betta....
My Vote-youngblood wit betta flow....no hate tho...nice drop....


quoting that b/c it is put into mad good words...i also wanna add my own thing i jsut wasnt feelin ATl's flow that much his lines kinda seemed a little stretch but over all it was a good verse but you mianly lost this atl b/c you started weak YB just went hard the whole way thru thats what got it for me

Vote - YB
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