emotional but a little shaky the flow is off and your vocab is lacking. i did hear the "realness of it" better structure would help. pretty good topic, there was a tupac feel to it which is always good. 6.5/10

/ OR JUST TRYIN TO BE SOMTIN IN LIFE, THAT PEOPLE ARE TELLLIN U ULL NEVER BE/ WHILE KEEPIN YOUR LUNGS FILLED WIT HAZE IN AN EVIROMENT CONSISTIN OF NOTIN BUT GANGSTAZ AND NEGATIVITY/ BUT SINCE I AINT REAL, U MUST NOT KNOW BOUT TRYIN TO GIVE UR ALL TO TO YOUR FAMILY, BUT THEIR NEVER CONTENT/ OR HAVIN YOUR BEST FRIENDS CALL U DURING THE PROCESS OF THEIR SUICIDAL ATTEMPT-with a little refining this could be a dope couple of bars its raw and powerful right now as it is