I tend to read things each line at a time. But I felt this had to be read at a faster pace and only pause and the end of each verse. Some reason, I dunno.

Great peice, of course. I can really feel the temporary distress displayed in the lyrical litarary vocabulary of yours. Around the tenth line I really liked it.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.