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Old 08-14-03, 01:37 AM   #13
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This is how I will break it down...
First Good battle...
Second NO HATE!!!!
Unfortunately there is something worng that I am not able to vote but if a moderator or an administrator see this please vote for me for Cerebral Assasin....

This how its broken Down

Punches = Cerebral Assasin
Multi's = Leaning towards cerebral assasin eventhough it was close
Flow = Cerebral Assasin based on that I rapped it and it flowed better...
Complexity = Tie
Vote = Cerebral Assasin.

Feedback/Comments/Pointers:
Keep battelin create a structure with all of your battles and stick with the structure at least for each bar also use more metaphores, complex words, and raise the bar and keep elevating your shit... Aight

Peace..
Return tha Favor and hit my Battle against chris wood three
Heres is the link address
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=704616