Yo im guna break this down. Sorry I cant vote so I'll give good feedback

DaShowstoppa won this in all areas

he had sum good Metas and Punches and that is what wins battles, along wit nice smooth flow


Lighting, you gota werk on ur flow, its kinda choppy and hard to follow dog, you had sum good punches, but ya need to use more of them and logs of Similies and Metas, you verse was justa little too basic ya know

Break Down

flow-DS
multis-niether side
Creativity-DS
Metas-DS
Punches-DS
Vocab-sort of a tie, but more towards DS

Nice battle, Thanks for the vote on my battle Lightning

Showstopper can u return the fav cog and vote on this, thanks

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