"The fire of your pain consumes you" the first thing that popped into my head as i read this piece. The first one was better i won't lie to you, as deciet said this is a worthy sequel however, in fact somewhat better than worthy, I enjoyed both pieces and feel that very soon you will burst out to display the talent you are holding back.

It grasps me as I choke,
Now I'm surrounded in thick smoke.
It engulfs me, as my body stops,
It gives up, my hope is lost.
The end has come, it all goes dark.
Goodbye, goodbye my love- this touched that dark part of my heart that was enjoys suffering. wonderful piece.
Thank you for the experience.