As everyone said heart attack killed but I actually want to let you know just take criticism as fuel to flip it on them..
Anyways I thought it was real deep piece and I actually like the flow although there were some pauses but in poetry there is nothing writen.. Mad Props...


Anyways I wrote another piece called spiritual not as deep as Not a Man ~ Eating me Inside but I would like your feedback/comments/pointers/criticism what ever you have to say thanks!! Keep up the poetry