I actually like this piece but it does sound like something Nostradamus said but I am 100% plus this is all Prophiit original work... Anyways your Multi's were really good But I think you could improve a little on the flow but not too much cause then I think it would be a freestyle and not poem...
ANyways remmeber there is nothing written for poetry it can be written or spoken in any shape or form...

GOod Job man great piece