well thank you very much, yea Nec I agree with you about that pausing at the end of it all... that was how I meant it, I dunno I like the flow to be like that when I'm angry I think... But I am glad that you noticed it. Content thank ya bud for sayin that I stepped it up, I really veiwed this peice as not so good because it has more emotion than anything in it and I'm not to that level yet where I can express extreme emotion and great writting ablities at the same time... but I'm tryin. Thank yuo again guys, peace