lol I like tha beat...the first dude got no emotion at all....and yes he sounds like he's SPED...but all u gotta do is work on emotion...+ ur vocals are too loud and no overdubs at all sounds plain as hell....production is pretty bad but don't worry about ur production until u get perfect ur flow and all that...lyrics are pretty good at some parts...at others it's real basic....ok the whole section leading up to "lyrical masturbator" was just.....nevermind...."money...this shit aint' funny..kill u when it's sunny..u softer than a bunny" that was wack as fuck lol....

the hook is iight...it's better than the verse....u to the hard P's when u say "power trip" where it pops when u say it....ok the 2nd verse is MUCH better...."classic whiteboy" like that dude said...who cares the shit is nice....overdubs would help ur verse a lot tho....but it was mixed better and ur voice is more bareable to listen to...

overall a decent track....it has mad potential but only if u put some work into it....

peace