Very tight piece man...the concept has been done, but you took it to a whole new level, with the colors and crayons. I don't know if this is what you were intending, but with the son and his crayons he seems to be innocent even while commiting the murder. Very dope indeed. I sometimes struggled a bit with the flow, but it might have just been the way I was reading it. Also said above the one line 'he's being killed by his son, like his wifes late fate' kind of sounds like the son killed his mom...could be a tight line if you just change it around a bit. A very nice drop man, props to ya...9/10

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