yo, I wasn't feelin' the concept... it was origional, but not my style... on tha real tho, the flow could've been better.. the vocab was good, wordplay was good.. there was a repetition I didn't get tho the 50 year old thing.. what's with that.. I took the overall meaning as a crayon box of emotions/life.. like an expression of soul thru colors, the crayon aspect gave it a certain childhood aspect.. maybe that's why u had the 50 yr old thing... like old meeting his youth... either way.. it was good...

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