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Old 08-14-03, 04:10 PM   #2
Whyte Ave.
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yo that was a nice drop man...it was simple and to the point, but damn it flowed so fukin smoothly. Had some wordplay in there, not much, but it wasn't needed. The Vocab was pretty good, nothin' to simple, but nothin over the top. Liked this piece alot...8/10.

Fav Line was:
Vocab, Wordplay, Flow Like The Niagara Falls...
But Still My Mind, Is Concealed Behind Concrete Walls...

check my drop out 'One Drink To Many'
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73202
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