Yeah, this seemed to me like Necro's - Most Sadistic track where he just trys rhyming on a violent tip, flow was dope on this, just needed a little work on the internals and multi's, but as you said - it was a keystyle, so you cant really put it down.
Only thing id really change is add some coma's so the reader knows where to pause for a half-second like this:
Guns, knives, livin in fear, lifes a bitch
always scared runnin from all kinds of shit
dodgin bullets, fightin your way through...
Feel me?
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