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Old 08-14-03, 09:40 PM   #6
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From: Pittsburgh,Pennsylvania Baby
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His breath is full of booze, really does stink

lines like this lose you flow while you got
it going well in everything

you said beer / alcohol a million times but this
was the topic you foucsed on and it wasnt bad at all

theres just some parts where your flow gets lost
but you picked up when it fell off...

this is more of a poetry piece....not knockin..
all rhymes are poetry homie..not bad

peace


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