'Through every negative I encounter in my life/
I WILL go past that obstacle in order 2 survive/'

It was only upon reading this a third time that I realised you had capitalised the WILL in the second line, and suddenly I read it differently. Almost felt like I was peeping on someones inner strength, it became a conversation with yourself and not so much the reader- Your telling yourself this, and Im glad to see that by the end of the poem it looks like you believe.

Coupled with a great flow, and rhyming without feeling like it was forced - I really like this work.. Kudos~

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