WOW!!!! I liked this joint right here, anyone form the hood would too i suppose. You not only gave us decent imagery (your hood was in my head) but you also let us have some of that emotion I felt in your other pieces. (I peeped those yesterday). If I had to say I didn't like anything it would be this line...........................

--Maybe then you wouldn't be filled with so many whys

.....only because it stuck out and to be honest you didn't really need it all it does is push the flow foward. But other that I loved everything else. Thank you for the experience. 1