ur wack rhyme has got no "structure", imma make u "collapse",like a asmatic runnin the marathon//

copy and pastin mortalitys rhymes,thinkin no one will notice,what type of shit u on?//

not bein funny dawg but r u dyslexic,cudnt read ur shit,not a single word spelt correct//

u had no flow,no rhymescheme,no punches,wack verses like dat.u make the newest nebie look a vet//

my advice,go to the wackness emergency centre and quickly,fore u embarress ur self any more//

dont cum back till u learnt how to battle,or at least structure a rhyme,ive won this battle for sure//

i no its only six lines but u didnt stick to the 10-20 line rule, that was not my best rhyme but shud to be enuf to beat this herb, u need to elivate