Its nice... good wordplay n shit, Could do with more metaphors.. flow was weak in some places..
like oddity and upon me - couldda been done better

but in other places like

once I strike and, my words alter your lifespan, indefinately,
despite man, all land will be clenched tightly in my right hand,
for infinite days, world set a blaze with my scepter as a mic stand,

it was sick

I give it a big fat 8