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Old 08-15-03, 03:45 PM   #14
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by ][\/][.O.B
[B]Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback

flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest

Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill

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KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//

Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?

keep elivatin dog u got potential

word^^^