first off i dont think this beat is finished is it???? cuz it definitely needs to be filtered and needs a lot of base to make it sound like a real hip hop beat, cuz right now it just sounds like the movie is playin in the background.....umm the first emcee was kinda choppy...flow was ok, but your delivery was off, lyrics were ok.....the second emcee did better, flow was good, lyrics were ok, and delivery was good.....this was a pretty good track, but definitely needs a little more work.....keep doing your thing tho....OnE




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