uhhh..this was descent at 1st..then it got horribly wack..the 1st 6 lines or so were ok..not the greatest..but not bad..after that..it got more simple..and more pointless..also..nobody and only dont really rhyme that well..flow was ok..multis were ight..seemed like u tried too hard wit this..structure needs a lot of work..keep all ur bars/lines even..seem to have the basics down..just gotta step it up..work on ya flow..multis..complexity..