nice way to let out ya feelings/aggression..never give up..never quit..bla bla bla..but u definately need to elevate..this was wack in all ways besides let n out ya feelings..flow was simple..no multis..content lacked..definately need to work on ya complexity..ya structure needs work..dont break lines up..



like that..dont do that..dont break the line up just so it seems to rhyme..

u got a lot of elevate n to do..but if u really like rap n..etc..dont give up..not many ppl started out ill..majority of us had to elevate as we went..