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My minds racin and I cant deny patience...
Probaly assumed that id be that freak slideshow
Strung out swung out high broke--no words just dopeness
For individuals that cant face facts they force feed...
Eyes to the skies perhaps god can riddle me with more glee...
Verse construction takes place without beats..--its getting better
Yall know I come longer than this freaking a track
Like two asian lesbians with pierced tonges
For those eardrums I fear none....--hahahahhahahaha
Dawg you got drumbeats in your words i mean that. This was dope, i kinda lost your flow in the third verse but overall this was a hot joint man. For those who doubted you give'em hell and those who stood in your way break their backs wit words. The title suggests this came off the top of the dome so there may not be any particular meaning but it sounds as if you're telling someone "this is ME and there is nothing you can do about it. I'm good I know i'm good and if you don't like it FUCK YOU". I think thats part of the reason I liked this poem so much. Keep doing ya thang homie. 1
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