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Old 08-16-03, 04:56 AM   #33
.King One.
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From: Wit Ya Girl , N' yoU donT kNow.
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ya'll both need to elevate.....
but i'll do you a favor and vote....


lol..



close battle, after reading it twice...
hmm...


specialized, your verse was shorter which means nothing, but your punches were kinda weak until the middle....
the only line i liked was that starter kit line....
no meta's or wordlay, learn wut that is for text batteling, it'll help you out alot....

dope-name...
you had a couple ok lines...
sister thing...but the following line under it was weaker then ghandies arms after he starved himself for 80 years....lol...
overall verse...


punches wise...dope game got it clearly....
vote-dope game...




peep
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