Thug Whyte, What Kinda Reply Was That....

Blueprint, Rhyme Scheme Was Dope!, But You had Some Valid Points..so..meh...

Rhyming/Flow
Both Mc's Verse Flowed Smoothly, Disciple's I Felt Came Out Stronger, He Had Mad Inner Bar Rhymin', Brib's verse Was Good Too, But I felt 13th's Came Out Top...9/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Lack Of Worpdlay here, But Vocab Was Sick, You FReally EXpressed The Animosity In This Piece, With Words Like: "Rage, Stomped, Mentally Slow, Afraid, Resistance" etc.... Both Of You Hit Hard With The Right Words here....9/10

Concept/Topic
Brutal Topic! Nice n' Original, You both PLayed It Out Well, As If it'd happened To You.. Well Hope This Didn't:"At the age of eight being raped"..lol, 13th You Played The Scared Sorta Darky Character, n' Brib Had The Reflection (lookign Back) into It... Was Dope As Fuck!....9/10

Overall
9/10, Lacked Wordplay Thats All, The Hook was Dope Too, Related To All Aspects Of the Story...Dope..

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