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Originally posted by Optikfeline
One round is all I need to put This Weak Ass Bitch to sleep…
I'll throw this rhyme in your casket, this shit is for you to keep…
Not a bad opener, little basic but ok
I'll make these words hit you like grenade particles when I blow…
You're so stuck on Wack rhymes, when you write yours they don't show…
Nice line liked this one
you write yours they don't show You go off like car alarms, all noise,
but don't cause no harm
Quoting Wackies so much, you're growing ja rule mic on your arm….
Nice wordplay, nice line, good punch
Now go get your lucky charm, cuz you's about to get hexed….
You'll read this text all perplexed, cuz I kill when I get vexed…
Nice punch to
I don't wanna spit much more, cuz you ain't even worth my time…
If I write too many nice lines, you might Try to Bite off mine….
LOL nice line, and wordplay to
Yo, your rhymes are as generic as astronaut's dinner plates..
Hope street, home of the whack, where X is getting raped…
Geheh, ok line bit played
Destroyed, stepped over, shot, killed, revived and killed again
start to love the pain
Nice puch
I'll make-this-dike-take-a-hike, like-a-third-and-final-strike….
Rapping you over and over cos I just grabbed my mic.
Good finisher, nice vocab
This was a good verse nice vocab not that much multi's good flow, ill give it a 7
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You a herb, battlin me your none the wiser,
I get high from ya hits when I vapourise ya.
No rhymes Bad opener*in my opnion
I hit you so hard that that ya feel ya WACK,
You couldnt deliver a suprise if had santa's SACK.
LOL, nice wordplay, little basic..but nice
You got nottin on me if you were climbing my sides,
You say your poison ivy but you couldnt smother my rhymes.
Wsnt that good didnt feel this one
You wont elevate in no shape or no form,
I'll hit real early so you feel the break of dawn.
nice flow, basic text...nice line tho
Even when you were spittin in school you werent a class act,
and working as a farmboy is how ya got ya stacks.
Nice punch here, liked this line....
The only way you giving low blows is when ya on ya knees,
The only way ya cold hearted is in 7/11 deep freeze.
Bitch please, i'll only snap one arm i'll give you a break,
Take it easy with ma stee,z i'll leave ya pretty boy face.
Nice punchm good flow to it, very nice line...
You couldnt hit me up if you were throwin upper cuts,
and you defenately aint lean you givin beef from ya guts.
I'll leave you contemplatin your life as you know it,
and if ya masters got a towel I suggest he throw it........
Nice finisher aswell
Verse rate 7+
Well this verse had some nice shit to .was a close call, but i think Xl took this on a little harder punches, the flow was iite by both of you...some basic lines here and there, but an overall nice battle...but vote = Xl