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Old 08-16-03, 05:30 PM   #13
Crysis
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Originally posted by .King One.
im sorry but i cant lie...
lyrical disasters verse was horrible....seriously..
you need to find out what meta's and wordplay is...
not to mention getta betta ryme scheme....
i mean is wasnt bad if you were freestyling this on front of my face, but on text.....no


biddy had a lil flow, kinda choppy, but his punches were better after half of his first sentence...lol
meta's were there...wordplay a lil....
i dont like how you brake up your bars tho...



overall...
biddy6 out of 10
lyrical 2 out of 10....


^ im feelin that

vote biddy....


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=73307^^^^peep
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