thanks all.

Content, I appreciate you getting into a little detail. to be honest, I wrote this not as a story but independent paradoxs attempting to lead from one end of the spectrum to the other (gentle to harsh), with some flow and transition. Then again, it may never really have had any direction being as it was written in 10 minutes. This was just my intial train of thought and I'll probably ride the train in the same direction, and lengthen this. Maybe make a little more sense too. thanks.

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