I just have to say wow on this piece....You really can feel the emotion behind every line in this poem.... Its feels like you have a lot of animosity towards this person(your mother). All I can say is great vocab, stucture, emotion, and rhyme scheme...Beautiful piece all around here.... I give this peice a 9.9/10

Treatment unfair, yet you demand toleration
Since I was 5 you had my utmost admoration
All I'm asking for is a little congratulations!

Instead you doubt my goals and ambition
Singing you're wrongs no song of admision
Supposed to shelter me from these conditions

^^^These two sections here are what really stood out to me. they just made me think about things similar to this in my life (which is really hard to make me do by just simply reading a poem.. But you managed to do just that)

Well done here I hope to read more from you soon