Quite a personal piece. Using a raw stance to bring forth the purity of the 'situation'. Especially the current mind set.

I would say at times the way the flow and simplicity fluctuated was a bit off. But then i guess that's part of the effect. The personal side taking over the piece in a sense.

The ending was understood, but still a bit unusual "I believe i define divine" - dunno if that is a blunt self analysation looking at a certain amount of relieved narcyism or maybe something else. You know, to put emphasis on how your life and mind is now more calm. Or just a wrong choice of words...

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