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Old 08-17-03, 12:53 PM   #14
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A'ight, herez ma breakdown:

Phillie Blunt's Best:
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I Could Use Metaphore Over Simile To De-Piece You..But Face It.. I Dont Need-Too..
So What I Will Do Is Feed-You.. Pieces Of Your Own Shark Ass We Call Sea-Food..

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All of yo verse was good...but this made me laugh the hardest.
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MrsHARKie's best:
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IN THE OCCUPATION OF PROSTUTION TOPPING ME THERE CANT BE NO SOLUTION EVEN WITH CONTRIBUTIONS I REST MY CASE AND CATCH ANOTHER FOR THE PROSCUTION
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Yo verses need ta elevate, but this was the best line in it...
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Breakdown:
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Flow: Phillie Blunt
Punches: Phillie Blunt
Creativity: Phillie Blunt
Ryhme Scheme: Phillie Blunt
Structure: Phillie Blunt

Overall: Phillie Blunt

MrsHARKie's verse was weak...but Phillie Blunt has a lotta potential....

Vote= Phillie Blunt I would poll vote if I could.