Anyways This piece was nice for a newbie , the first seven lines were Sick , but the last 5 lines were Whack..........U fell off , and that messed you up..............I see u had some nice Wordplay in there.............Ur vocab was aight , Overall This piece was Aight , I give u a 6.5/10 , Return the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72854