The complex rawness (due to how you wrote so within yourself first, then depicting to the audience second...to a bursting like good effect).

An overall explosive piece of emotions, hidden with personal meanings that are not closed for the reader to inteprete.

Placings profound lines in and around ones which keep the essence of the piece going. Yet all with relative meaning.

You've done a few pieces like this (i mean the subject matter). Not exactly the same, but along the lines. This one seems like you're going into the 'end zone'. With the 'sick of being nice' feel at the start. And overall constant hard hitting barrage. If this was off the top of your head, you must've been in the 'zone'.

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