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Old 08-17-03, 05:57 PM   #10
brainsurgeon
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 623
IP:

punches/disses: tie
flow: tie
multi's: solar
vocab: rappad
metaphors: solar
creativity: tie
originality: tie
wordplay/complexity: solar
opener: solar
closer: tie - solar was funny and rappad was decently nice

vote: solar

advice -- solar make your bars proper 2 lines = 1 bar 'cause battling people who count properly, it will be like cheating
rappad -- don't separate your bars with those silly headings -- also solar don't separate bars -- have crossover multi's to help you flow and it's bad some times to change from multi's to one word end of line rhymes which at one point i think you did -- what else improve (-- because that's the point of participating) good luck to you two -- come harder in following battles, look at what's filler and get rid of em