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Old 08-18-03, 04:22 AM   #11
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i thoguht this sogn was horrible
even tho u ugys had a good rhyme scheme an fllwoin to it
da chorus was weka
an slik u shud use better vocabulary
basic song i wasnt really feelin it
looked a bit weak
im not tryna hate but i record alot of songs sum wit e-40 so i no a good song when i see da lyrics this was good on azz's part a lil slik u had potnetiol buthmmm wasnt feelin ya shit too much
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