Originally posted by E-Lyrical
Fed Ex totally outclassed this otha kid...u got some skillz. But anyway herz tha breakdown:
Fed Ex's Best:
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Nigga you cant handle this new comer, the name is Ex, I'll be haunting your dreams and thats only where you'll find sex/
My rhyme scheme for you to understand,never,its too complex, Man I'm basically already finished with this wack Emcee,NEXT!//
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Tite.
2Hot2Handle's Best:
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wires everywhere and pieces/8
im gonna bang all your nieces/8
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This wasn't tha' great. U could have used words like "thesis", expand yo vocab.
Tha Breakdown:
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Punches: Fed Ex
Flow: Fed Ex
Ryhme scheme: Fed Ex
Most Laughs: Fed Ex
Vocab: Fed Ex
Structure: Fed Ex
Complexity: Fed Ex
Overall: Fed Ex
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