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Old 08-18-03, 02:56 PM   #9
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Franklin? Whitman? Aesop. . Maybe, but I'm not the least bit of Poe
If depression claims you. . Find sunshine. If you don't, remember: you reap what you sew

that was a tight line....
This is basically one of the most constructive Open Mics to be put out in a while.It was a good drop all in all,flow worked with it, but to me, it felt like a poetry read then lik a rap verse, but even still the topic was good, and it was nice to take a turn from whats going on and shit. Good shit.

This is but a piece of the puzzle. . Take it, and sucess is more than explorable
To the crowds on anti-depressants. . It's your fault, you hoard the deplorable

I was feelin those lines right there. Some real good shit. i hope to see more from you.
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