deep shit, didn't read the whole thing 'cause it was too long an' I'm a slow reader.. but from the first half I really liked it.. you conveyed emotion real good, imagery was depicted nicely.. for such an' emotionallt distraught time you seem to still have a pretty clear head... 1

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74026
^now peep this

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