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Old 08-18-03, 06:54 PM   #2
deser_eagle
duh.....
 
Posts: 568
From: da dirty south
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here's my verse:


yo dawg, you went ova ten lines

ya rhymes are ~sad~ like a retard wit ~downs syndrome~
bitches say its a ~syn-i-kill~. not physically, but lyrically, right 'fore you reach da top, ya ~pen-i-kill~(pinnacle...top of ya career). my flows are electrifyin like da chair, it'll ~shock-ya-fella~,
my guns'll ~pop-ya-fella~ like i assassinated that bitch ~roc-a-fella~. i'll ~take ya breath away~ like i cut outcha ~vocal chords~ wit my ~lyrical sword~.
workin out thinkin ya gon' get ~pumped up~, gotta gun that'll ~pump ya up~ wit lead. send six of em through ya head.


i know this is prolly wack but this first battle ever.
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